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7 admitted essays shared for UCI

BerkeleyUCIUCSDUCSBUCLARegular

UC PIQ

“Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.”

As I walked into the brightly lit room, I found the untidiness of the place unsettling. I had come to my sister’s lab, and my first thought was how quickly we could leave. It wasn’t until I learned about my sister’s…

343 wordsGPA 4.60Admitted 2023
BerkeleyUCIUCSDUCSBUCLARegular

UC PIQ

“What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?”

“How old are you even?” The little kids glanced up at me, as they examined my age, which did not match the typical age of a teacher. This was my first time standing in front of a class. As the child of two Turkish…

342 wordsGPA 4.60Admitted 2023
BerkeleyUCIUCSDUCSBUCLARegular

UC PIQ

“Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes, or contributed to group efforts over time.”

During our trip to Greece to visit family friends, I faced a reality that was nothing like what I had imagined. Every person we encountered during our trip was a refugee from our home country, Turkey, and their stories…

340 wordsGPA 4.60Admitted 2023
UCIUC MercedUCSDUCSBUCLARegular

UC PIQ

“Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.”

What’s the value of life? The complexity of the human body is truly one of the most magnificent structures ever to exist. A single foot comprises 38 bones, 30 joints, and more than 100 muscles—held in place by 2…

333 wordsGPA 4.60Admitted 2025
UCIUC MercedUCRUCSDUCSBUCLARegular

UC PIQ

“What have you done to make your school or your community a better place.”

As time was ticking, empty chairs became witnesses to the long hall of absent seats. An hour passed, and still, there was no audience to hear the presentations, leaving my heart heavy. This disheartening scene unfolded…

346 wordsGPA 4.60Admitted 2025
UCIUC MercedUCRUCSDUCSBUCLARegular

UC PIQ

“Beyond what has already been shared in your application, what do you believe makes you a strong candidate for admissions to the University of California?”

Panting. Grunting. Sweating. Bleeding. But I keep moving. There are three minutes left on the clock out of five minutes. I watched his every move, the degree at which he throws his hand, the placement of his feet, and…

340 wordsGPA 4.60Admitted 2025
UCIUC MercedUCRUCSDUCSBUCLARegular

UC PIQ

“Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.”

I entered the grand ballroom of time, witnessing musical notes dressed in shimmering robes of sound, gracefully waltzing in a harmonious choreography, expressing sorrow when needed, anger when necessary, and happiness…

347 wordsGPA 4.60Admitted 2025