UCLA
4 admitted essays shared for UCLA
UC PIQ
“What have you done to make your school or your community a better place.”
As time was ticking, empty chairs became witnesses to the long hall of absent seats. An hour passed, and still, there was no audience to hear the presentations, leaving my heart heavy. This disheartening scene unfolded…
UC PIQ
“Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.”
What’s the value of life? The complexity of the human body is truly one of the most magnificent structures ever to exist. A single foot comprises 38 bones, 30 joints, and more than 100 muscles—held in place by 2…
UC PIQ
“Beyond what has already been shared in your application, what do you believe makes you a strong candidate for admissions to the University of California?”
Panting. Grunting. Sweating. Bleeding. But I keep moving. There are three minutes left on the clock out of five minutes. I watched his every move, the degree at which he throws his hand, the placement of his feet, and…
UC PIQ
“Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.”
I entered the grand ballroom of time, witnessing musical notes dressed in shimmering robes of sound, gracefully waltzing in a harmonious choreography, expressing sorrow when needed, anger when necessary, and happiness…